Friday, November 25, 2011

"Do Seek Their Meat From God"

The panthers go out for food
The child run away to find friend
The hunter goes home triedly
When they meet together
A ridiculous tradge forms.

The panthers go closer and closer,
The child cries louder and louder,
Finally the hunter take out a gun
Shut.

The panthers snarling furiously,
They died
They left their two little panthers hungry to death.

Sympathy,
Irony,
Their death is bonded closely to our human
It all caused by human's irresponsibe and arrogant

Human become stronger and stronger
While more and more animal died under the human's weaspon
Actually,human and animals are all equal,
Both the things created by the God

1 comment:

  1. It was nice reading your poetic responses to the short stories. I thought the last stanza in the poem about Love was particularly effective. Continue working on making sure your expression is clear by editing for grammatical and mechanical errors as it helps us understand your ideas better.

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