Wednesday, November 16, 2011

What is love?

                                                  Love is the lamp at the loneliness,
                                              Give the guide  the people in the dark.
                                                 Sometimes bright, sometimes light,
                                                         But always there.                         

                                             Love is the sunshine in  the garden,
                                                        Give out warmth
                                                         Warms other
                                                         And himself

Therefore face smiled,  heart warmed,
Emotions cherished, mood joyed

                                   After a slow dance,
                         He and she will together forever
                         No complanit, no hate, only concern
                                       That's love

                                  After a slow dance,
                            He can't get out of her sight
                             She is his whole world
                                       That's love

                          After a slow dance,
                  They are no longer one persson
They will meet difficulties together and overcome it no matter how hard it is
                               That's love

                           Hope,  pleasure,
                           Concern, belief,
                       Suffering and challenge,
                               That's love.

8 comments:

  1. Very creative poem. The content is deep.

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  2. I think that you define love completely which is to overcome every difficulty together with that person. I like the comparison such as "Love is the sunshine in the garden",which makes me just feel so warm~

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  3. Your peom touch me so much.
    If someone love you not because of who you are, but because of who she or he is when she or he with you.

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  4. 童养媳。我欣慰啊。
    I like everything you write in you poem.I agree all things you said.

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  5. I really love that you said love is sunshine. It's beautiful and warm. I was moved by your first picture as well. These details compose love.

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  6. I love the third picture! haha and your poem, of course. I like the sunshine part especially, because love plays a very important role in nourishing our lives, just like the sunshine. Good job!

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  7. I like the first part of the poem, it's so true!
    Also, i really like the last picture, very cute XD. Great work !

    Joewin H.

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  8. I like the pictures you use for the poem.I like the first part most.Love gives us power and confidence.Excellent~

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