Give the guide the people in the dark.
Sometimes bright, sometimes light,
But always there.
Love is the sunshine in the garden,
Give out warmth
Warms other
And himselfEmotions cherished, mood joyed
After a slow dance,
He and she will together forever
No complanit, no hate, only concern
That's love
After a slow dance,
He can't get out of her sight
She is his whole world
That's love
After a slow dance,
They are no longer one persson
They will meet difficulties together and overcome it no matter how hard it is
That's love
Hope, pleasure,
Concern, belief,Suffering and challenge,
That's love.




Very creative poem. The content is deep.
ReplyDeleteI think that you define love completely which is to overcome every difficulty together with that person. I like the comparison such as "Love is the sunshine in the garden",which makes me just feel so warm~
ReplyDeleteYour peom touch me so much.
ReplyDeleteIf someone love you not because of who you are, but because of who she or he is when she or he with you.
童养媳。我欣慰啊。
ReplyDeleteI like everything you write in you poem.I agree all things you said.
I really love that you said love is sunshine. It's beautiful and warm. I was moved by your first picture as well. These details compose love.
ReplyDeleteI love the third picture! haha and your poem, of course. I like the sunshine part especially, because love plays a very important role in nourishing our lives, just like the sunshine. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI like the first part of the poem, it's so true!
ReplyDeleteAlso, i really like the last picture, very cute XD. Great work !
Joewin H.
I like the pictures you use for the poem.I like the first part most.Love gives us power and confidence.Excellent~
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