Tuesday, February 28, 2012

WAITING

There are the first day of spring,
The weather outside is still cold
The sound of leaves blowing across the field
Inside he sow seeds in a brown container with warm

The man staring at the plant, abstracted
He's waiting,waiting for the miracle
As if the plant will grow sandwich after he puting a sandwich on his head
And he will no longer starve.

One month, two month, half year has passed
The hope is small
While he is still waiting for something is hopeless
Like life is waiting for a person to waste time

Now, in the man's head,
The way is empty and clear, no more sandwich,
Life should do something valuable
But  he is slept forever.

Life is ended
All proved out to be failure
Life is for doing valueable thing
Is not waiting  for the appearance of hopeless
-----------audience:  to those people who lost their way in their life
                written by: Lisa dong
                message: It is a poem that narrates a straved man waiting for a plant to grow out sandwich that can fill full his stomache. While finally the man ended his life with waiting. Itis a suggestion to tell people that spend the time on valueable things instead of wasting time on doing something is useless. When someday you realize you have waste to much time, it 's too late.


1 comment:

  1. This is humorous Lisa! The video unfortunately is not working. As well. you needed to include the speaker, audience and message. Other than that great work!

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